I need to better refine the outline of my research proposal so that it will be easier for me to compose all the components. I then plan on developing that part of my proposal and making the necessary changes for the literary review. I had a lot of comments on organization and sentence restructure that I can apply in my writing. I also want to add more extensive synthesis to my paragraphs to help better utilize my sources in my writing. Then after all of that, I can put those things together! I plan on meeting with Dr. B to get some advice!