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Blog #4 Pans for Revision

 I need to better refine the outline of my research proposal so that it will be easier for me to compose all the components. I then plan on developing that part of my proposal and making the necessary changes for the literary review. I had a lot of comments on organization and sentence restructure that I can apply in my writing. I also want to add more extensive synthesis to my paragraphs to help better utilize my sources in my writing. Then after all of that, I can put those things together! I plan on meeting with Dr. B to get some advice! 

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  1. Hi Taela! I think that adding more synthesis writing is an excellent idea. I didn't review your outline; however, there's no such thing as having too much of it. Also, I think that meeting with Dr. B is a really great move. I hope it goes well and you're able to move forward quickly in your research paper. Good luck!

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  2. Improving the synthesis within paragraphs always improves our writing. I also love that you're taking the time to refine the outline to make it easier for you to compose content. Meeting with Dr. Bacabac will be incredibly helpful, ash she can guide you through what is needed for the assignment.

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